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Post by wickonian on Jul 20, 2014 0:17:30 GMT
finally getting round to posting some of the first chapters of noir, Malik has been heavily involved in this so if you see her style of writing mixed in then that's why. So yeah thanks for the help there. This is a long one, haven't gotten any where near the end yet.... hope you enjoy what we've gotten done so far.
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wickonian
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Noir
Jul 20, 2014 0:18:10 GMT
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Post by wickonian on Jul 20, 2014 0:18:10 GMT
It was a quiet night in The Club, and that was just how i liked it. I was stretched out in the sofa nursing a glass of luke warm scotch, watching the wind blow people along the street light brightly coloured leaves in a gale.
The door opened and a gust brought in one more wind borne dancer. The disturbance caused me to look up just as she arrived. The pale grey cloth of her coat drawn close around a slender, almost boyish frame. The thick crimson furred stole held in place with matching kid skin gloves contrasted strikingly with her delicately pale features. The storms careless attention to her short red hair had given her a slightly wild look, but she seemed unconcerned by the glances and murmurs she drew from the bar flies as she all but glided directly towards me.
A quick smile from pale lips served as her introduction. "Well well, just the man i needed to see" were her first words, spilling into my ears with a slightly foreign accent. I remember thinking the smile that she gave me was not one of a girl in need, as she gracefully settled herself onto the couch, ankles and hands both drawn together to sit demurely by my side. The glass of wine that was hurriedly brought to her hand by an over eager barkeep was indistinguishable in hue from the gloved hand that reached out to accept it.
"I tried to engage your cousin’s services, but alas he has failed to reply." She shrugged as she took a sip from the glass, pale blue eyes fixed on me over the rim. “This could however prove to be fortuitous, as you are apparently not without similar skills, and have the added attraction of not being associated with me, or my family.”
So here i was, evening steadily heading towards a pit trap, i felt cornered, and i didn’t like it.
"So, will you listen to our request?" A simple question I guess, but something about the tone put me on edge. Was it not being able to place the origin of the inflections in her tone that had me on edge, or the way the eyes did not seem to match the ‘little girl lost persona’ she seemed to project?
"Go on, I’ll listen." came my reply. There was definitely something odd about her, but as much as a growing part of me wanted to turn and run I could not deny that Jonas owed this women a debt, and it was a debt that I wanted gone.
"I'll cut it short, as it is a long tail." she chuckled to herself at some private joke in those words as she produced a document, seemingly out of thin air, and passed it to me. "An old friend of the family has met a more unsavory end than we would perhaps have liked. I request that you find out who did it.” She paused before continuing, the soft voice developing a harder edge. “If the rumors concerning your talents are even partly true this should prove a simple enough task for you, no?” A sip of wine interrupted her thoughts then the soft voice asked lightly “well what say you, yes or no?"
I would later be told by my cousin Jonas that the average man would say yes to this ladies requests, and that the smarter man would know he never had a choice. I guess the type of 'smarts' that he referred to cannot be cultivated within the books that i so adored to read when i was younger.
"No” I replied. “Or at least not until i learn more. Firstly why do you need me or Jonas to do this? Caille City has the finest police in the state, and a women of your obvious breeding should have no problem demanding their full attention.” The smile never dropped from her lips, though the eyes now took on an edge to match the earlier one in her voice "Disappointing, though I should state that the question was merely a politeness. You will help us in this Gyra, for your own good and for the continued health of your kin.”
"Are you threatening me?" I asked, my temper starting to show. I was having a hard time matching the praise that Jonas had lavished on a name with the obviously manipulative woman that perched serenely next to me whilst quietly sipping wine.
Again that question was met with a warm smile and a look cold enough to put a man in his grave. "Threaten?” she replied calmly “No, I have no need to make threats. I make my displeasure known clearly through my actions.” Standing slowly she smoothed the creases from her coat before turning on an elegant heel. “I expect quick and above all discreet results in this matter. A debt is owed and, by one person, or another, I am collecting.”
With those words she headed back out onto the street before I could think of a suitable reply. The last thing of that night which i can recall was the empty wine glass, sparkling in the light as i opened the case file Miss Tay had provided.
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wickonian
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Noir
Jul 20, 2014 0:20:27 GMT
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Post by wickonian on Jul 20, 2014 0:20:27 GMT
The rain did its best to change into hail as it pounded the street. Stepping out of the bus I turned up my collar in an attempt to dissuade the wind from biting into my neck, the persistent beat of the rain spilling from my hat to soak into my coat. Crossing the street I walked towards the patiently waiting figure, his distorted shadow stretching across the empty street cast by the yellow tinted glow of the street lamp he was unsuccessfully trying to shelter under.
"Hell of a time for a reunion Gy." The shadows owner said, face briefly illuminated as he struggled to light a cigerette against the storms attention. “First this murder case, then your cousin and his patner tearing up the town pursuing their own investigation before Jonas vanishing himself…..hell of a mess we have now.”
As he walked me over to his car he cursed to himself as a puddle's water seeped into his shoe “We are stretched too thin these days, budget cuts and all, we just don’t have the man power to investigate high profile murders and clean up after you, just try and keep things neat ok?” Climbing into the drivers seat he laughed bitterly to himself "And to make matters worse we got the womens association breathing down our necks."
"It's not just here Ace, whole country's gone to hell with this damned prohibition." i replied, as i clambered into his car, the stench of his smoke rolling over me like a wave. Unpleasant but strangely nostalic, the smell reminded me of my childhood, the acrid tang dredging up memories of my father and crowded public bars in Northern England.
The car pulled off the curb, the glow from its headlights reflecting eerily in the rain.
"I’m going to have to see the crime scene." i muttered, more to myself than anyone else. The meeting with Miss Tay playing over in my head. “Just what have we gotten ourselves into” I thought to myself as the world past by the car's rain streaked window, she knew Jonas wasn't cut out for this, yet she had tracked him down after talking to me and sent him here anyway.
"The site's gone my friend, target of arson the chief says." Looking at him i could see the embarressment on his face, and that in itself was all i needed to know.
"We'll uncover the truth, make no doubts about it." Ace nodded, as he stubbled out his cigerette on his dashboard. "We have pictures of the scene as well as the police reports back at the station, but first you should get some rest." He suggested.
"Not even putting a bullet in my skull could help me rest. i just want to do three things, find my cousin, solve this damned murder, and leave this town. Not necessarily in that order. Take me to the station." i gazed out at the streets passing by as i spoke, i know it sounded cheesy like some detective book, but you really could see the grime. People trudged though the streets, the ocassional building emitting light and the shadows dancing past the windows.
"Just as long as you don't burn out on me." Ace sighed, as he put the car in reverse, backing up into an ally before pulling back out, heading in the opposite direction. "And don't expect a warm welcome when you get there, chief's had it up to here with nosey Brit's."
We sat in silence for most of the rest of the drive, the odd question followed by a closed answer, neither of us were good with small talk, and the weather along with the tone of the journey didn't help.
As i stepped into the station's main office i was met with the smell of cheap coffee, and stares of the deprived. It was a scene i had seen before, the messy investigation board covered in old photos and reports, strung together by a mass of string shooting this way and that. Towering piles of papers on each desk, it was clear these men were going round in circles, and were running on fumes.
"Who the hell are you!" Roared a large man, as he emerged from the largest pile of reports, coffee stains dotted across shit once white shirt.
"This is Gyra," Ace began, as he stepped forward from behind me, "he's going to help with th-" The man cut him off, pointing his finger at me he snarled, "No more damn PI's, the last one almost ruined the whole case."
"Sir, this one's actually skilled, and he's-"
"No. I've got pressure from above to close this case as unsolved as it is."
Stepping forward i pulled a badge form my jacket. "May we speak in private sir?" I asked. He looked at the badge, and went white, then purple, "You think that-" he began, before i then spoke up.
"My name is Seam Daigon, FBI, we are currently undergoing an operation that this very case may be linked to, you are legally obliged to aid me."
"What operation is that?" he asked, as i pocketed my badge.
"Classified i'm afraid, and secrecy is a must, hence my ATTEMPT at a false persona."
He looked at me for a while, i could see his brain furiously proccessing the information, until, with a curse, he stepped back, pointing towards a room at the back.
"You find everything you need back there." He muttered, as he stormed off towards his office.
"What happens when he calls up the bureau and checks?" Ace whispered, as we entered the room.
"Same thing as when i did, they'll tell him all information on Agent Daigon is classified and that you should fully cooperate with Daigon."
"So, who is he?" Ace asked.
"I haven't the foggiest," i replied in all honestly, "and more importantly, neither does your chief."
Ace chuckled to himself, "I'll have to remember that particular trick."
"Just don't get caught."
I walked over to the table lying in the middle of the room, a dim light hanging on the ceiling above it. "Now back to the task at hand." i whispered, as i opened up the report sitting there. two photos fell out, one showed a stair case, full body bloody footprints leading upwards, a bloody smear following up beside them. The other showed the corpse, lying on the floor eyes opened wide, throat torn apart, lying in a large pool of blood. Grimacing at the sight Ace picked up the photo of the corpse.
"We believe he was killed else where and then dragged here to be dumped." Ace said, tossing the picture back down on the table.
"A lot of blood for a body dump," i mused, looking back at the picture, the cameramen was clearly reflected in the blood around the body.
"We think his throat was torned up after being brought there, to hide the marks of the murder weapon." Ace sighed, he pulled another cigarette from his pocket, as he sat down into one of the two chairs that complimented the table. lighting it, he looked back at me, awaiting a response.
"it would have been useful to have seen the actual site, i can't tell how much blood the floor soaked up with just this." i absentmindly plucked the cigerrette from Ace's hand as i pulled the other chair out form under the table. Lifting the cigerrette to my nose i inhaled letting the smoke fill me, before letting it back out through my mouth, i knew it looked like a weird way to smoke and i knew it was wrong, but it helped me think, and that night i needed to think. "So, who found the body?"
"Chris Cesa, he's a former broadway actor, before he lost his legs." Ace leaned back over snatching his cigerrette from my fingers, i let it go, i was only after the one breath.
"We'll need to talk to him tomorrow, along with the other suspects."
"You've gotten all you need here then?" Ace asked skeptically.
"Yes and no, i don't want to push my luck with your chief, i'll read the reports in the motel. If i need to, i'll ask you a few more questions on the way to this Chris guy tomorrow."
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wickonian
Inner Circle
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Noir
Jul 20, 2014 0:25:14 GMT
Post by wickonian on Jul 20, 2014 0:25:14 GMT
I lay in bed, face full of pillow, i knew i was conscious but i didn't care, my dreams were still running vividly in my head. they were pleasant dreams, of lost chances taken, and lives i knew i would never live. The phone beside the bed began to ring, an ugly old thing, but as modern as you would expect from a cheap motel.
With a grunt i managed to slip one of my arms out form under the pillows, reaching up and grabbing the phone pulling it down towards my ear.
"Gy, you've got to get up!" Ace's voice rang through sharply.
"Can it wait? i'm still in bed, not even had my coffee."
"No it can't, Chris is in hospital." My eyes shot open as i pulled myself up to better listen to the phone.
"You know the one who found the body? i'm at the hospital now, you need to get down here."
"Do they know what happened?" i asked, pinning the phone to my ear using my shoulder, i scrabbled with my trousers, my legs had yet to fully function and the wrinkles in the cloth were proving to be a challenge.
"Drug overdose, something called 'Zerk.' We don't know if it was accidental or not yet, he hasn't woken up."
"I'll be right there, just got to hail a taxi to get there, look, if he wakes up, i need you in there when they interview him, i need to know what he says."
"Alright, but hurry, Path's here. I don't know what state Chris will be in if Path gets first go with the interview."
"Understood." I replied, before slamming the phone back down on it's dial, and turning for the door, sliding my arm though the sleeve of my shirt i swung the door open, stepping out into the blaze of the morning sun, which was aptly burning away the remnants of the nights fog.
"Taxi!"
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Post by Malik Moriga-Tay on Jul 20, 2014 10:53:14 GMT
A good start Jonas, don't stall now!
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Noir
Jul 22, 2014 0:08:28 GMT
Post by Minerva Serekar on Jul 22, 2014 0:08:28 GMT
i say get a brothel involved, with minerva as the madame
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wickonian
Inner Circle
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Noir
Jul 22, 2014 5:00:04 GMT
Post by wickonian on Jul 22, 2014 5:00:04 GMT
i was going to have it with you being the owner of a speakeasy, but a brothel works as well. Ill see what i can do
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Noir
Jul 22, 2014 5:42:26 GMT
Post by Malik Moriga-Tay on Jul 22, 2014 5:42:26 GMT
If your taking requests I say you write Eli into that role
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Elisk
Inner Circle
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Noir
Jul 22, 2014 14:28:03 GMT
Post by Elisk on Jul 22, 2014 14:28:03 GMT
Yes and I'll have Malik captured as a slave and working forced extra hours for the customers... Sorry you started it...
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wickonian
Inner Circle
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Noir
Jul 22, 2014 15:30:41 GMT
Post by wickonian on Jul 22, 2014 15:30:41 GMT
awww, but i had plans for you....
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Noir
Jul 22, 2014 16:17:24 GMT
Post by Malik Moriga-Tay on Jul 22, 2014 16:17:24 GMT
Oh unfair Eli. I think a Speakeasy is an illegal bar - that's quite suited to a Caldari business woman. The brothel, now that's got Min written all over it
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wickonian
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Noir
Jul 22, 2014 16:55:02 GMT
Post by wickonian on Jul 22, 2014 16:55:02 GMT
speakeasy is an illegal bar, that is correct
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Noir
Aug 9, 2014 0:28:15 GMT
Post by Minerva Serekar on Aug 9, 2014 0:28:15 GMT
go with the speakeasy then, seems easier to work in then a borthel
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Noir
Aug 9, 2014 0:29:04 GMT
Post by Minerva Serekar on Aug 9, 2014 0:29:04 GMT
unless you decide teh brothel works best, its your story
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wickonian
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Noir
Aug 11, 2014 7:52:34 GMT
Post by wickonian on Aug 11, 2014 7:52:34 GMT
think of it this way, in a speakeasy you can pick and choose, no such luck in the latter kind of establishment
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Noir
Aug 19, 2014 18:59:02 GMT
Post by Minerva Serekar on Aug 19, 2014 18:59:02 GMT
*chuckles* too true, though if i may suggest, gives Minerva some kind of prosthetic, maybe not all 4 limbs, but maybe her leg, or arm, probably more the arm, since her fighting style relies more on her legs then her arms, and today's prosthetics, and/or those in teh time this story is set in, aren;t that great for fighting
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